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FREE DOWNLOAD Tutoring Lucas î PDF, eBook or Kindle ePUB Ï To David Stark Lucas Stevenson is pure sex Competing on the university swim team has given him the kind of body you see in underwear ads or on the cover of G and David volunteers in the tutoring program just for a chance to spend time with him When he finally works uAnd David volunteers in the tutoring program just for a chance to spend time with him When he finally works up the courage to ask Lucas out and Lucas says y. Reviewed by Amber Opposites attract is the theme of this novella and it's obvious when these two guys connect it happens in a big wayI liked the two characters and while the connection between them was nice I did think there was too much sex packed into the 52 pages of this story They're going at it all the time I would have liked to have seen their relationship developed and exploredIf you're a fan of instant chemistry and lots of sex this novella might be a good read for youB

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Tutoring LucasTo David Stark Lucas Stevenson is pure sex Competing on the university swim team has given him the kind of body you see in underwear ads or on the cover of G. Spoilers I guess Not that there's anything to spoil ‘Would it be too forward if I took a look at your erection’Ahahaha No Zero build up for this The dialogue feels utterly clinical Not a zing in sight Not even a tiny one Meanwhile I’m still trying to figure out who these people areSeriously what’s the plot here Two guys eye each other for two years from afar Then they hook up There’s a tiny misunderstanding The endLet me try this with detail because I am trying to understand this thingDavid’s been looking at Lucas for two years Lucas has been looking at David for two years Lucas’ friend tells him to go for it David’s friend tells him to go for it David and Lucas exchange the barest minimum of words or anything else possible to arrange the date We get to see them fuss over their respective clothing They meet exchange a few stilted lines Get down to sex immediately Uh Why am I supposed to care againThese people are not talking like college age guysA horrible suspicion as to who the author might be snuck up on me at this point Unwarranted but what I did find saddened me I actually liked one of her books even if the other disappointed me This Argh Should have checked the author firstThe writing’s sadly lacking Sometimes it feels as though sentences are missingFor example Lucas walks up to David grabs his hips then opens his pants Next we know he is sucking on David’s cock But does he kneel Is he bending over at the waist What How’d his head get down there It seems like a small thing but something like that can create a disconnect I need to have the players placed spatially at least in some wayA bit later they decide to take a shower together They stand up still talking laid back and all Next paragraph begins with “The pair broke their feverish kisses as they reached the bathroom” Wait they started kissing Feverishly even HuhI mean not everything has to be spelled out it really doesn’t but this feels like the reader is expected to fill in the blanks “Take a guess at what’s happening Bonus points if you get it right” Shouldn’t the author be telling me the storyThis wouldn’t be remotely as bad if there was actual heat being generated a sense of being swept away But it’s not Those guys get off in an unemotional way and then chat however long it takes to get hard again all the while wishing they did not have to talk at all UhThe phasing’s incredibly repetitive too No shying away from reusing a word over and over in the same paragraph or a distinctive phrase just two paragraphs lateruite honestly I wonder why David’s expecting this to be than a one off to begin with Nothing I’ve seen gives the impression that Lucas wants The whole little no way was it big misunderstanding’s just a jokeThen it ends finally and I catch myself asking out loud “Um what” Because I must have missed the point of this storyCan’t have been for the emotional side as there was none Can’t have been for the sex since it was abbreviated repetitive and a carbon copy of every other sex scene by this author that I’ve read complete with her particular kink Can’t have been the plot either since there was none And interesting characterization Can’t say I noticed any of that interesting or otherwise Not even in a measly side characterMeh This one just sucked the joy right out of me